Comments : Falling into Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    The only suggestion I have is: With the first stanza you wrote "A dance in the air" and then for the second & third you wrote "A dance of life" ...you could either change all of them to the second one.. or.. you could change one of the ones in the last two stanza's to something else.. Am I making sense?

    Anywho, apart from that, I thought it was a good poem. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, a very great style and a very romantic poem, you have done a great job, 5/5
    i really enjoyed it......

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    AHh...
    Thanks for pointing it natalee
    It's supposed to be 'love' in the 3rd...
    I have missed typing it..
    Thanks.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awsome! thats soo romantic ;)

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Very good, i liked your choice of words. And the way you wrote was definately unique. Kepp up the good work! 5/5 =)

    -Te Amo.

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I like the style and the concept of "free falling at your feet." only question: second stanza "Of a broken hearted..." a broken hearted what? i didn't understand where you were going with that. but that is all!

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    Wow this is so good.
    i like the style
    very romantic :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hey i like this poem the rhyme is great! very impressive keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I love how you wrote this. the flow was great.. it felt like I myself was floating in a sweet and soft reverie. Great job!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This one was great aswell. Wonderful job yet again. I love your poems they are very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow i love your idea and the creativity I love how you write and all your wordings great piece again

    5 for a filipino lols

    Geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Audrey

    That was an excellent poem. I really love your style, simple and elegant writing. Your going directly into my favorites.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I LOVED THIS ONE! The emotion and heart you put toward it, was amazing. By far the best I have read from you.. GREAT WORK!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeanette

    Very Good, i can relate to it pretty well...also thanks for commenting on my poem(=

    Jeanette

  • 17 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    Aww so beautiful