Wow, This was really good, hun. I loved the ending, a great strong finish! Everything flowed nicely, too! Great job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Amazing once again. really excellent. I Love u Emma!!! Keep writing!
-Suzie

Aww how sad! that was really close to bringing a tear to my eye!
great job!
MandiexOx

Hey.. u write great poems! i could really relate to it .. __x33

I love it!
its sad but its really good.
you're a great writer

check out some of mine
~5

~Tay

Ooo wow, i've never read ur work b4 but i tell u what u've made a great first impression excellent poem xox sam

Your heart is in another's hands,
Who'll crush it into dust,
The wind is ice and she is cold,
To survive I know I must,

Absolutely loved this stanza. Bravo.

Awe, very strong message. Very sad message as well.

"Your heart is in another's hands,
Who'll crush it into dust,"

I loved those lines. They truly captured the feeling of someone having to watch someone that they love be loved and love in return, someone who they deserve so much more than what they are. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.