Hello poet..
this is truly a sweet written poem, I love the last stanza..esp when you mentioned her name, ending the poem with it...very heartfelt and emotional! Idk, but this is a breathtaking and very touchy!!!

"Your name was on my breath" I So liked this line. very powerful..shows that she really meant your world and your other half =)

Very great job hun, keep it up
Thanks for the inspiration
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Oh what a lucky girl Andrea was to inspire such words , beautifully written, I hope you will love with that same intensity again someday.

This is a great poem with perfect rhyme, i like the felw of it. you have done a great job showing your emotion.
it is so great and so touchy.

Great job on this poem. such beautiful lines very touching and heart warming. keep it up xx

This was not what I expected when I clicked on love poems but it was definately a wonderful suprise. This poem was truly amazing. Great talent embraces the writer of this...great job! 5/5!
~Jules

OMG
that is beautiful
it made me cry
lol
i love it
love kanjii

I know exacty
how you feel
in that situation
i was once too in
love with a boy
only he left
me and wanted
me back... just
not as much as
i wanted him..
and now its over
and i wish that i
could do something
to get him back for
real... i wish the best
for you... i hope
that things will get
better some day not
only for you but
for every lost soul
out there that is need
of a good lift!! just
remember all the goods
times you had with
your loved one.. and if
you really really love
that person.. then let
them know that... dont
keep it in it isnt gonna
help any one if you do that..
let people know how you feel
SPILL YOUR HEART OUT!!
volley_freak_jess_09@hotmail.com
add me and we can talk ANY ONE!!
msn..
byebye now..
good luck
love always..
~Jessica~

I liked this one more!!soz! i just did, it is a very beautiful poem!

Bert, i am trying to get the meaning of the first line, but i figure there is typing error. "My despair will never ending" Should read " My despair will never end" or "My despair never ending"
Well, after all is said, i have to give you kudos for writing long sweet poems that always inspire. Take 5

Everything was already mentioned before me...great job

I really liked this.

Superb.My heart skips a beat while reading this,truly.

God Bless!

Wow another touching poem! you got the talent for sure! wow 5/5 i loved all 5 of ur poems!!! i enjoyed reading them!

Thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me

Omg beautiful poem another one of your peices that almost made me cry. Which is good because it had so much feeling put into it.
5/5