Hey this is my first poem on here PLEASE let me feed back thx

How sweet very romantic....i can relate this poem full of love..the emotion is great very wonderful poem.. thanks for sharing this great poet its really great and i was enjoyed!

Wow, very well written peice of poetry you have written. I loved it. Keep up the wonderful work.

Aww its sweet. i give it a 5/5

Okay i lied. this one is my other favorite lol. ur a really good writer..keep it up hun:)..and take good care of your son and daughter...and that husband of yours:)

That is a very very sweet poem for your hubby! 5/5

WOW for your first thats great!!

best one i have red from you

Keep it going

5/5