Wonderful dedication, Bill. Your heart poured into this piece. God bless you my friend!! Here's to your son :)

What a wonderful tribte you have made to your child.

Very well written, flowed like a cool stream.

Keep it up. and keep them coming.

Jeannie

The love flowing from this beautiful dedication is just .....OMG Bill, beautiful .
Your son has pulled through the difficultest of times knowing he has a father who will forever stand by his side....through thick and thin...a father who is so very proud of him for the great man he has become .
Your son has had many, many hard times in his life , yet he was never alone Bill ....you were always right there . Whether it be in the flesh or in his heart, he knew you were always there for him and he was always your number 1 .
It is love that pulls us through the difficult times in our lives and those words of "I love you" and "I'm proud of you " make the painful memories so much easier to handle .
A beautiful dedication Bill !
Take care, my friend .

....................AND......................
"A VERY SPECIAL HAPPY BIRTHDAY "
....TO A WONDERFUL YOUNG MAN....
................HAPPY 18th.................

You have created a wonderful piece about your son. He should be very proud to have a father like you in his life.
Again, great job!

Geesh Bill...I am completely speechless..I'm just...wow! That made me cry..whenever I see a mother daughter, or father son relationship like that, it just melts my heart!
Happy b-day to your terrific son, I hope the two of your relationship doesn't end!!
Beautiful poem!
Chell

BEAUTIFUL! a very hearfelt write

Good writing it really is a strong piece.

Great poem i wish all fathers took there responsbility as serious as you do well done.

Okay, first off, if his mother tried to stab him to death, then if i was you i'd hate myself. you are on my favorites list, but wtf? you had a son with a maniac?

She wasn't a maniac the first five years of marriage and wasn't when he was born 18 years ago....however, two years ago she became mentally ill and refused medication...