Compared to your other stuff, this isn't AS great; it is good, but not super duper fantastic. In my own opinion, I feel there's too much of the same lines, and not enough of describing what those lines mean...know what I'm trying to say? It's still good, no kidding, I just feel it needs some more work.
I miss you most horribly.
Do take care, dear lovely.

Much love,
- -SJGxx

Hey ben
i'm in english at the moment. i was bored so i thought i'd go on good ol' poems and quotes.. i like this poem. i like the way you repeat the 'i am's. it makes it sound like a song you could be singing. best of luck for the end of school. have fun at schoolies week and happy birthday. stay safe at schoolies though lol :* we want you back in one piece!
love always
greta xx