Comments : Once apon a time...

  • 17 years ago

    by braydens1mommy

    I love your poem great job. Your right you can't have Happily ever after. You can have a happy life or love or marriage but that is it. Keep up the good work.

    Please if you could comment on my poems
    Thanks

    Looney bug

  • 17 years ago

    by Elaine90

    Wow em I really like this one. You are really good. You really should show people. Lylas Ash

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THiS POEM iS SO BEAUTiFUL GiRLY! OMG! THiS iS THE BEST POEM i`VE READ OF YOUR POEMS! REALLY GREAT MESSAGE AND iNSPiRATiONAL! GREAT JOB!

    -SHELBY-

  • 17 years ago

    by Adele

    I love your poem, the way you wright is amazing I love the way you took a story and made it personal your wrighting is insparing. (sorry about the spelling)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Its soo pretty... you have amazing talant:D:D:D:D:D ashlee

  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Beautiful!, thanks for your comment, ps you mispelled prince in either the third or fourth stanza

  • 17 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    I love this...it is so true..omg you are awesome! god i love this
    can u plz read some of mind..pref..those featured on my profile! thank you xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by LoveYourMan

    Hey!...i love the poem!....but im commentin cuz i just saw one of your quotes...the one that starts with.." just when ur bout to give up on "love"...i love that quote sooo000ooo much!...cuz thats exactly what happened to me last night...lol...well i love the quote and the poem...great job!