Another great job, i really like your poems and your talent, i think if anyone wanna get better in writing poetry should follow your path, you are great.

Woah thats powerful. Your use of vocab and description is wonderful. Such an amazing poem. Great job. =]

I like this one more than ur other one (ur most recent) coz it sounds much nicer! n think you should enter this one!

I like this one more than ur other one (ur most recent) coz it sounds much nicer! n think you should enter this one!

I prefer your other poem (Falling in Darkness), because I feel it has better description in it, but this poem is still excellant and shows your talent You have used excellent vocabulary and good description, and althought I don't think it's as good as the other one, that doesn't stop it being great!

Imi
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This is really nice, Noni. Well, not NICE, but it is good. I wrote one about high school, you should read it. I didn't read your other one yet.... well, once again, 5/5!!!! lol

Like the way blood bleeds dry
((I don't know why, but I loved these simple lines..))

I didn't like this one as much, with all due respect I think you could have 'said' it better, but as always, your wording is amazing/perfect. You really know how to describe objects and express things others can't. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Amazing once again, you have such a talent! Your words paint a picture in my mind no matter the word choice you use. I sure hope you take advantage of this talent you have! 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Wow, soo good.
Your word choice just amazing
wow im so speachless.
it was just So good.

I love this poem. i think you will win the contest. xox leah.

Loved it... was beautiful

I fell your pain

Cool poem. Good job!

Cool poem. Good job!
now plz read and commit mine as ive done for you...

Nice poem I loved your choice of words