Awesome poem! reminds me of a couple i wrote! well done!!! :)

I love it! Great JOb and Keep it up

Awsomw JOB
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Hey, Great poem, well done wiht both rhyming and flow, both are nearly perfect, the only thing i would suggust is capitalise your I's.
anyways, 5/5
~She Died Screaming

Truly beautiful
amazingly written
heartfelt.
great job =)