For a ten year old this is really good, i'm 14. i really like how you worded it. keep up the good work. shanik

Wow you are a really strong writer and only ten....KEEP IT UP!

Thats really good...full of feelings..great job..your poems well get better and better as time goes on but for this one i give it a 5/5..keep up the good work
auna

Awesome poem keep up the great work love ya Shanik