Comments : Broken

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. so sweet and so sad. my favorit is the begining. keep writing:)

  • 17 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    This is bloody beautiful hun wow

    i love this line

    Scars hidden beneath the fake smile
    When for you I would have walk miles
    A prisoner of the heart, of loves game
    How much I'm broken it's a shame

    pfft the hell with love hun

    its a waste of time i rekon

    loves the poem

    xoxox