Hey! Brianna
This iz very nice poem! i liked it alot! it flowed very well...but i think you should make this a bit more longer...but i liked the idea of this poem! It was well written!
Well Done on a fine Job!
Keep It up
And
Keep Smiling

The ending was just perfect and emotional!
although you should try making the I's capitals.. It sometimes makes poems much more attractive to read
4/5

They all already mentioned the I and flow of the poem, I saw that the rhyme was great and it is enjoyable to read plus you can feel the emotion ghreat job

Geneross

Awww Brianna!!! This is amazing! Fantastic job! I loved it!