I did get the point you were trying to make, although you went in a very different direction with this poem than I thought you would have, based on the first few stanzas.

The rhyming was pretty basic, but it did rhyme, and it flowed smoothly through out the whole poem.

I enjoyed this, good job.

Good poem. Excellent rhyming and great flow was usual. I can relate to this poem too. I enjoyed it. [5/5]

As* usual