Wow that was amazing, and really true about the Russian Roulette, my best friend wanted to do it, accpet he wanted to do it alone.. I talked him out of it and everything, and this poem kinda reminds me of the incident it is really well written. Great work.

Hey this poem is so good, i really loved it, the page seems to spark with words!

Wow...very nice maybe a few flaws but the amazing storyline make them not noticable...because that is some amazing writing I like how you write stories with your poems