Good piece.
nice rhythm.
sad dark words.
5/5
couldnt be more perfect!
~Emma

Nice...u r obsessed with corpses lol
=] nice work

Great poem liked it all the way...the ending is really nice too 5/5

great read
:)

namiii
lol

Cool poem!! 5/5

Your writing pattern is really very unique, few words flowing and blending so smoothly with each other and creating the darkness all around....beautifully penned

all the best and take care

Wow dark too,i like it! you're style just keeps getting better :)
xx

Samantha,
You really have a way with these poems. Your style is like none I have seen. Amazing! Excellent job! Take Care Cindy