I really like this poem good work xoxoo love georgia

Hey thanks for the comment. I really like this poem.
~DyingBlackRose~

Pretty good. The theme was clear and the emotions real.

-there...should be "they're
-Change the e to a in Important
-the last line of the first stanza doesn't flow as well...get rid of the "from"
-Try removing "even" in the last stanza.

Keep it up

Beautiful poem.
The emotions/thoughts are just great.

God Bless!