This poem was veryu beautiful. You said so much in few words. You're very talented. WOnderful poem. 5/5.

Very very beautiful...=]

I really like the way you write will you check me out sometimes thanks.

This was good and yes i am a girl lol

Very nice poem , i really think you have a knack for writing, =]

keep up the good work.

5|5 for the sweety.

x.x:Lauren

Oh my...daniel, what a lovely penned, though 2stanza but well expressive emotions....well done!