I loved this poem as i can relate because i dont have a bad life and people acuse me of makeing up the fact im depressed and i jus feel sorry 4 my self...loved this poem so much xoxoxo keep up the good work xoxoxo

I love this poem, so true... by tye way the girl moved

I like the style and the topic you chose. Here's some stuff I found:

-The flow of the poem seems a bit off
-shed...as in "She'd"
-may...as in "many"
-whats..."what's

You may want to add commas in some areas. Also for your footnote, add a *, so people don't get confused.

Keep it up

Very Interesting write..
Something different.
Keep up the good Work!

God Bless!

Awww another great poem. its flowed nicely and i liked the rhyming. godd job 5/5

Okay i believe you then. im sorry!!

Perfect..... i like the message great job! 5/5

This is me ... that all i got to say

OH AND WELL DONE ..!!

[..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]