This one has such a strong ending, the last line is brilliant
i like the second verse too, it gives me great images
ace as always luv
xxx.

I liked this poem it was very well written with some nice choice in words, Great job!

Woopwoop
I recognise this little fellow HAH

Beautiful
xxxx

Excellent poem ,well worded and the flow was good, love the ending ,well done , great job ~5/5~ your friend Tracy