My god ho....i love it....its got so many emotions that i can relate to personally...i love it...i cant even begin to describe how much i do...lol...like, as much as i pretended to like ur cookies!! lol. 100/5!

That is absolutely amazing. I can relate to that with my dad. You're an amazing wirter. Keep it up.

Great Work. Thank you for the feed back =] its greatly appreciated.
Keep ur work up.
Jess