I loved the way You wrote this, with times changing with the seasons.. the wording and rhythm was really good.. well done.. great work 5/5 xx

Silver lined grass blades, that are icy cold, and stinging to the touch.
((I really love and adore these lines..They're simply amazing.))
before summer faded to fall.
((And this simple line...))

I liked the imagery in this, but the ending was a let down, to me. The rest though, was very creative and thought provoking. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

This one is very touching, full of detail too. Great work Kepp it up!

I like the titled w/ this poem i can feel the emotion and the story was great .. good job!

True emotions showed in this poem, i like this poem just like i like all of your other great works, you are a talented poet.5/5

The description and strong emotion you used in this poem is very well though out. I also love the simple line of; summer faded to fall. As soon as i read it it captured me. An amazing job you did here. 5/5 =]

I really liked it it took me a while to get over the 2nd line excellent vocabulary amazing poetry You seem like an interesting person to talk to and I know almost no one that enjoys poetry as I do aim me stupidairyman