Very nice job in this poem, i really like your style, 5/5

Its very very good It was only when getting near the end that I realized the meaning and then it hit me smack in the eye (Enthralling) and again a great poem from you well done

5/5
John

This one I had to read twice cos I couldn't get it at first. maybe i'm tired cos I just woke up. Early mornings. lol. It was an interesting write though. You describe your feelings well in a poem.

Oh, that really is depressin (coz my mate is in kinda the same postion as you, she fanci's this boy mega bad and he knows, but he will neva go out with him) I liked this! 5/5 n i loved the message!

Thats another nice poem! yet sad! keep it up!

Great! awesome! you're a great poet.