Beaytifully penned with great imagery and use of words. Ilike the words chosen to rhyme as they are original!

BABE BABE BABE, i love this!!!! I love all your poems and im reading them all again!!
i LOVE this stanza

"Jesus has scribbled your name under "liar"
So here's your last chance to be redeemed.
You were given your life to be liven with love,
Not to be destroyed by love's foolish dream."

its PERFECTO!!!!! =]

I love youuuu