Every things fading upon this foggy night here.
((-Thing's-
I really liked these lines...Very creative.))
The sounds are dulling, and the crickets chirps are growing.
((-cricket's-))

I liked this poem. It was very creative and the end was a shocker.. I really didn't see it coming. Also, it was beautifully written. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Awesome Writing, Im going to read more of yours. 5 up!

A very great poem, full of real emotion and I really enjoyed it, 5/5 from me.

Fabulous....the emotion is good even the flow well i rate this poem 5/5 coz it make me sad at the same time just keep it up!

god bless...