Can kind of relate to this poem. It's very good.

I think it would be better if you cut it into stanzas, like a diff. paragraph for every sentence. It would look a little better, but whatever. It's a nice poem either way.

That poem was very good, Great job!

I loved it!!

Nice toad and still u have some rhymeing i hate it that u do that without noing it but its wat makes u a betta poet then i.