Comments : Doomed

  • 19 years ago

    by Brisa

    Awesome. i love the line
    "im doomed for life"

  • 19 years ago

    by Bitt3rSw33t

    I really loved the poem a lot and the way you wrote it...I would've loved to have read a deeper, deal closing ending....but overall beautiful job...

  • 19 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh wow...i loved this...you put so much emotion into this short poem...very well done...5/5.