This is a sad poem but im glad the man doesnt kill him self its so well writen 5/5 xoxox

DAMN!..that is one of the best poems i have read yet!..i give you credit for this one.i freaken love it.excellent job:)

I LOV it. the second last vers made me think. it has a very strong meaning. gr8 job:)

Very nice...I really like it, it portrays how people feel very well. 5/5

~Rixxi~

I love your poems. This one is great! I like how you got across a feeling of helplessness in it but showed something stronger behind. The stronger feeling being the thing the prevented the trigger being pulled. Your poems are an absolute pleasure to read they are so clear with a gripping story behind each one. Fab!

Kelly
xx

"it longs for love of days gone by
of kisses tender by the moonlight"

Even within the most heart wrenching poems your words are beautiful..
Such a deep and powerful hun, a variety of emotions make this a work of art...
Well done..
5/5
*Gem*