Amazing!!!
so deep in emotions. i lov the ending. u got a nice flow. i just can't pull my eyes away from this poem. plz writing mor:)
xoxox

Wow, vivid imagery, disturbing n chilly. My eyes were glued to the screen! 5/5 Excellent Job =)

Great! wow creepy i luvd it! good job and nice flow...so disturbing reminded me of sumtin like a horror movie! 5/5 great job!!!

THIS IS SUCH A GREAT POEM BUT I THINK IM GOING TO HAVE NIGHTMARES NOW!!!

This is a awesome poem! i wish i could write like that...

Good poem.
Keep up the good work. You're a good writer.
5/5

Kaytie.

Great malice, smoo

It is so moving and so great.

Well wasn't that just fantastic....
Your really talented... that poem was really powerful, I love your work... and in love with this poem 5/5
tc xx