Yet another beautiful sad poem you potray here, though sad but well express emotions....well done!

hope you have a great day.....and thanks for your nice comment on my stuff, much appreciated! take care..

best wishes from west, bert ~

Awe that was so sad, I know lots of people that are in abusive relationships but too scared to leave the person && it truly is a sad thing. I liked this one, but I felt that there could have been a stronger ending. It was such a stron poem, and then ending needs to be stronger than the poem && I didn't feel that it was. Just my opinion though.

5/5

-Jenna.