Haha that's cute.
And I have often wondered myself what happens when it's our time to pass. Are we re-born and what not. Only the deceased know, so until my time I shall use my little mind and keep thinking until my time happens to pass me by.

Anyway I loved this poem just as much as your other one I left a comment on. :]

Wow I like the story and thought behing the poem..it is such a good read, the ending was perfect!

God Bless!

I'd leave it where it is, in life! I liked this though because it was very true and ceverly written!

Soz! *Cleverly (I think i've spelt it right this time, sorry if i didn't)!

Mr. John, I love the way you write poetry...your poem is amazing...it was truly a beautiful short story...beautiful! 5/5

Lol...John you never cease to amaze me. Another great poem from you.
Have you ever thought about publishing your own book? If you haven't I really think you should. Well
anyway this poem couldn't have
described my thoughts on most days.
I always have that feeling as if I have
been a certain place before. Sometimes I can even go to a place
and already know where everything is
at. So you see your poem makes a
lot of sense and I think you put it
under the right catagory. I love your
work. SO PLEASE HURRY UP AND
PUBLISH A BOOK SO THAT I CAN BUY
IT....lol

Keep up the magnificent work.

Love
Letty

P.S. I don't think your old, Your just
wise..lol.:)