A very interesting poem. A unique look on the concept of time. Enjoyed! Jpoet*

Very interesting write..It leaves me with a lot of questions..
Well done...

God Bless!

I love hearing peoples outlook on time its a great subject and your poem did it the utmost justice

John, this was beautiful nature poem you penned here, its simply but flowed with beautiful message.. so inspiration write!

bert ~

"time is irrelevant."
I like you, Mr.Whuppy.
I'll have to say.
:)

When I'm 62, in 50 years, I hope I'm something like you. I want to be submitting poems on websites and truthfully declaring that I had a band.

What you say is so true.

it's really surprising - a lot of what I write is on similar lines too - i wrote one on time a long while ago. it's called "The forgotten clock"

i really enjoy reading your work.

good luck and peace.

shobhana

Wow....You really gave me something
to think about John. I really enjoyed
reading this. You know I have always
had questions about some of the things you've mentioned, and I truley
thought that I was the only one who
thought that way, but it took one of the
worlds amazing poets to point out the
facts to me...lol...Keep up the good
work John, and I hope you do become
an Assistant Manager because I
believe you've earned it.

Love
Letty

Although the whole poem was wonderful and got me thinking I really thought this stanza was the best:

what if the sun had refused to shine
what if the moon never rose
would we still worry and stress and fight
if there was no day or night
we wouldnt exist i suppose

Loved it, Loved it.

John, my man.

Time is one of my favorite concepts. You did the concept and everyone who reads it great justice by writing this. I think about time all the time. And I believe is a worthless measure of change. Thats all it is a man-make measure of change. But through time we Ironically waste it my trying to measure it as opposed to living for the sake of happiness and enjoyment. Thanks a lot John I enjoyed reading this wonderfully penned poem that is very thought provoking.

Arsalan D.