Perfect wording and one of the most brilliant use of line breaks I have seen in a long time, I think we could all take a lesson here and use those line breaks to set the pace that we want. A thouroly enjoyable read thank you.
Tim

I really like this poem. It's somthing I can really relate to. My favorite line was :

"Those whom love us do not give their silence, but makes us face reality"

That really is the truth. Amazing write.

~^_^Anthony^_^~

Beautifully done my friend. I spent years alone, leaning into the wind and life is much better with someone. I love this write.

............If we never take chances and share our love...........
............ We will forever be, a lonesome dying soul .............
....................................Alone.............................................
............................Blowing in the wind .................................

The sum of a very beautiful write. Well done.

This is a really nice poem with a great message I enjoyed reading it. Thank you

~ Arsalan D.

Beautifully written my dear friend. You have a gifted pen that lifts my heart with each read...keep it up.
Love ya~Holly

My goodness..
That was beutiful Luanne, Absolutely beautiful! Well done, :D xxxxx

Luanne... I really like this piece!! A very tantilising poem, that subtly invites wonderful imagery and deep thought. Great work!!

Oh my God..
You are Good .. O:

Such emotion can not be put into a better poem than that. amazing job!!! keep writing. check out my poems a wilting memory and a parents nightmare.
lots of love
hayley

Wow!!!

The wind my only nonjudgmental friend, silently listening
cold at times, yet still warmly embracing
drying my tear stained eyes with soft gentleness
sweeping over me, cleansing my soul

I can't begin to explain how this peace has touched me. Your words motivate me in my state. A great poem Luanne
5/5

Brill layout on this one, if it's possible to add more to this poem, that did.
I don't know how to descibe the emotions this poem put me through,
I may have interpreted it differently as a result.
But still, just simply amazing!
5/5
*Gem*