Beautifully done. Walls go up so easily and come down over time. As they do, we expose our hearts and minds to the very things we spent years locking out. This one hit home for me...having spent my entire life not letting people in.

Tim, you blow me away with your style of writing . You seem to leave it up to the reader to make their own interpretation of the meaning behind the words . Your poetry makes me think, which is what makes is so truly wonderful to read .

You have ran with the "wind" topic and created a masterpiece .
Thanks for sharing !

Very free verse, I enjoyed it. Good job.

Beautiful

Damn Tim... This wall of protection barriers what you do not want to let in, and yet somehow you want to let your guard down for a while. A very imaginative piece that is damn terrorfying.

Of wow, this is beautiful, sad, and so powerful! I love your poetry and I've missed reading it, I'll be catching up soon... This is awesome, Tim! So many excellently worded lines throughout...

It is a very good poem. I am locking ford to reading any other poems you put on this site.
Brittany

That was really deep and beautiful 5/5 keep it up=)

allie

Lovely imagery, so very heartbreakingly beautiful... Good job.

I liked alot good job painting the vissuals