Comments : Dear Ana,

  • 17 years ago

    by Anthony

    Wow. This was a really great poem. It was a different look at an eating disorder and i thought it was realy creative. If you have a friend that is really going through this, I hope you are able to help her beat it. my favorite line was:

    Because, I'll beat you, you just see
    You didn't count on meeting me
    For I will never join you world
    Because I love mars bars and twirls"

    It added a sense of comedy to it. I really enjoyed this. Awesome write.

    ~^_^Anthony^_^~

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Oh dear Katie,
    I feel your deep emotional sadness through-out this entire piece .

    I get a sense that you are so desperately trying to help a friend while another is turning her in a different direction .
    And you are sad and frustrated .

    I hope I am reading into your words correctly , otherwise I would feel like such a fool.....lol

    Take care Katie, glad to see you back writing . I've missed you .

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Strong and powerful... They've gotta be told!! Great work.