Wonderful write from one so young
It just knocks me out the way that young people today can write so well

However do you realise that cutting your wrists is one of the most painful and lingering ways to die it could take up to 3 hrs of excruciating pain before you go into coma and then another hour before all the 8 pints of blood drain from your body

John

5/5

You are so great, yet all of your poems are sad, why?
great writing 5/5

That is so sad but a brilliant way to express yourself there. You did a wonderful job and I admire your talent. Keep it up :)

One of the best poems ive read in a while! well done! 5/5

Thats another well written poem i loved it! the flow was good! and felt real but like u said its just a poem!

Awesome poem KEEP IT UP!!!!!! congrats!

I have to say; great title! It's vague and provides just enough meaning to hint at what the poem's about. Flow is great, and the meaning is strong and influential. I really like this poem, even more than the others'. 5/5