Wow god, this is so great, another 5/5 from me.

You really love writting for contest well u should, you are good at it :D:D really 5/5

Hey thanks for your comment! wot did u mean by college????? erm cool poem btw keep it up yeah

Aww I really love that poem...great job! 5/5

Different than what I thought it would be. nice job! Jpoet*

YOU WON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1st place! thankz for participating! congrats!

I'm not sure I understand this poem. I do like the word choice and rhythm, though. Capitalizing the title in the last line kind of distracted me from the meaning in those lines. It reads quite well, though... 5/5

Ohhh this was so heartbreaking and yet written so beautifully and elegantly.
I loved the imagery used in this, it created vivid pictures and the ending was perfect, it was so intense and hardhitting.