Sad poem. :'(
but good work though. =)

Wow! This is awesome! Great job! Please check out my poems and tell me what you think! thanks. :-)

Really liked the idea for this poem Jpoet*

I like it, 5/5 and good work =) keep it up

Hey, great poem, good rhyming in all but the 3rd stanza.
i like the way you have used that one line the whole way through.
well done, love Mel