Comments : Smile [A Wordless Conversation]

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really like the last verse a lot...that expressed everthing very nicely. Good job!
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Isn't life beautiful like that? I love life it's great. and people are great too.

    BEAUTIFUL POEM.. Love it!

    --Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very true. Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Nobody EVER smiles at me
    Nobody Loves me
    Just kidding

    A lovely poem and what a way to start your day

    I enjoyed this

    John

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .:*Br!tt@ny*:.

    Wow this poem is really good!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh that made me smile reading that, it was so sweet and simple. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Awesome! thankz for participating in my contest!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    I loved this poem because it was so genuine and nicely written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you, Robert.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Good poem... the rhythem was good and it put an image.

  • 17 years ago

    by becky

    Genuine reaction to the action
    nice

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    That's exactly what a lot of your work does! makes me smile! great work, Jeannie!

    peace
    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Awwe! this made me, you guessed it, SMILE! its so true, i love those random smiles people give! great job on portraying this kind of thing.
    Emily

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    Very nice...i dont know how many times a smile has said more than a thousand words for me...your words are music, i love it!

    ~~rikki~~

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very well done. Smiling can make you feel good, even if you don't, and one from a srtranger can make your day....you said it perfectly!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Smiles are sometimes contagious. They can really make a persons day. Great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Oh wow. i love this poem. its amazing!! you have a great tallent. :D

    That smile stayed with me all day long
    A stranger's simple action
    Though not a word was said to me
    It caused a sweet reaction.

    ^that stanza is amazing!!! i love it.

  • Love the poem.. you are so descriptive.. good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Love this one too. your such a great writer! and this poem is so cute, i kno how it is!

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    That smile stayed with me all day long
    A stranger's simple action
    Though not a word was said to me
    It caused a sweet reaction.

    ^ thats m fav stanza!!!!!

    great poem

    Narc xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Wonderful, again. A bit choppy at first, but the last stanza makes up for it.