I really like the last verse a lot...that expressed everthing very nicely. Good job!
~Jules

Isn't life beautiful like that? I love life it's great. and people are great too.

BEAUTIFUL POEM.. Love it!

--Ally

Very true. Great job

Nobody EVER smiles at me
Nobody Loves me
Just kidding

A lovely poem and what a way to start your day

I enjoyed this

John

5/5

Wow this poem is really good!!!

Awwh that made me smile reading that, it was so sweet and simple. 5/5

Awesome! thankz for participating in my contest!

I loved this poem because it was so genuine and nicely written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you, Robert.

Good poem... the rhythem was good and it put an image.

Genuine reaction to the action
nice

That's exactly what a lot of your work does! makes me smile! great work, Jeannie!

peace
shobhana

Awwe! this made me, you guessed it, SMILE! its so true, i love those random smiles people give! great job on portraying this kind of thing.
Emily

Very nice...i dont know how many times a smile has said more than a thousand words for me...your words are music, i love it!

~~rikki~~

Very well done. Smiling can make you feel good, even if you don't, and one from a srtranger can make your day....you said it perfectly!

Smiles are sometimes contagious. They can really make a persons day. Great poem.

Oh wow. i love this poem. its amazing!! you have a great tallent. :D

That smile stayed with me all day long
A stranger's simple action
Though not a word was said to me
It caused a sweet reaction.

^that stanza is amazing!!! i love it.

Love the poem.. you are so descriptive.. good job.

Love this one too. your such a great writer! and this poem is so cute, i kno how it is!

That smile stayed with me all day long
A stranger's simple action
Though not a word was said to me
It caused a sweet reaction.

^ thats m fav stanza!!!!!

great poem

Narc xxx

Wonderful, again. A bit choppy at first, but the last stanza makes up for it.