Great subject. The emotions were real. You may want to add "ed" to disappear for grammer reasons unless you purposely did that to rhyme. Keep it up

Yet another excellent poem 5/5
thanks for the comments as well on mine ;) was it hard publishing your own poem book?

I as im sure many girls can relate alot to this. i loved how you wrote it. i got confused at some points but overall it was good!

I can relate alot. Very good write, such raw emotion and just a really good piece. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Awesome poem. Very heartfelt and touching. my favorite part was:

"Why have you done that?
Don't you have a heart too?
Why have you done that?
Didn't you know what it means?
When a person say (I Love you)??"

That part touched me the most because I know what its like to say i love you and mean it and the other person not having a clue what you're talking about. Excelent poem man. keep it up. ^_^

~^_^ANTHONY^_^~

Awesome poem. I felt the love =)
5/5, love Emma xx

I love the word ''was''. Know why? Because.. it shows what used to be, but isn't anymore. It is so strong, such emotion is put to it. Nicely done.. on the poem. Good work.

You told me I was your life
How come you just disappear?

wow, I can relate to this, it is so great, could not hold my tears...

Why have you done that?
Don't you have a heart too?
Why have you done that?
Didn't you know what it means?
When a person say (I Love you)??

oh my lord, a message that was the greatest.
I wish i wrote this to a person who decieved me once in my life.It is so hard when they can not get what love means. today they tell you I love you and tommorow you'r just a history to them, Exellent job dude, I wonder why you are in my favorite list.

This was a simple poem but really touched my heart.. actually i was amaze with most of your poem most of it were so simple yet really touched directly to the readers heart like this one. great work!!