This poems wasn't too longm in fact the soft descriptions present such a calm feeling which continues to stay with the reader. It was beautifully penned, with great visuals presented by your words.

Yeah this poem was great it is calm and the words you use was amazing
it keeps the reader to continue reading by those words you used and yeah this is beautiful

great job

geneross

Silver, beautiful penned you potray here, simply within every stanza, but writing well with beautiful ended... "loving life with dreams replete, for the souls combined, yet still, How sudden ended and complete......"

have a great day, best wishes from west... bert ~