This poem was written after i broke up with Shannon Bond... she was my love... and i was hers (i hope)... but in the end... due to losses... and pretty much to much on each others plates... this is what it came down to... please... if this ever happens to anybody else out there... stick with it... because... the heart ache of losing the one you really loved... is the worst pain you will ever experience...

That's the way my ex-fiance and I broke up...Now eight whole months later, we're actually talking and trying to understand one another. Just try to stay strong, my best wishes to you...and your poem...was of course lovely...5/5

Baby im sorry i couldnt answer your msg and im really sorry to know about u n Shannon.... i hope your mum is ok... and babe everything will work out just give it time but i think right now you need to worry bout home and let her focus on her study..... i know its hard to hear but as you said you called it off all i can say is the same as last time talk to her stay mates or at least try, then when everything else is sorted out maybe try again.... just take it easy hun and i promise ill catch up with you soon.... love ya mwah....

You really are a wonderful writer. I can feel your sadness through your words.

The pain of young love! Sometimes goes on forever. You write so good! I really enjoy your work!

Another great poem. I understand the emotion in this poem. Another great write. Nessa