Comments : Now I lay me down to sleep

  • 17 years ago

    by Gillian

    Wow I really love the way you write.. something about if just sucks you in and give you a picture of how is feels.. thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Brisa

    Great poem!! damn. such a sad story but it was great

  • 17 years ago

    by Bitt3rSw33t

    When you described her actual suicide, it was described very well, with lots of emotion, but I felt as though you lost the core of the poem towards the end...but overall your poem had emotion...

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT

    Really great. very touching. so sad but so amazing. keep up the good work.
    -xox-

  • 17 years ago

    by Baybeeh

    For some reason ur poem really touched me i got shivers thanks for the idea though luv ya

  • 17 years ago

    by Baybeeh

    For some reason ur poem really touched me i got shivers thanks for the idea though luv ya

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    This is really sad but think of the bright side you have a mom lol 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Well These are the types of poems i usually read... This one is one of the best... you are so talented.. i love your way of writeing.. never let anyone stand in your way of writeing.. keep giving me something to read something to look forward to...