That is such a nice poem.

How sad=ll. I hope everything works out. Or.. did work out, I should say. Nice job. Great emotion and heart.

Oh,
a deep one,
I love the lines

So now you know
after you left
beside my heart
what else you killed

so meaningful

Soooo touching....i love it...yaar aacha hai 5/5

Nice work..
Like it a lot!
keep it up

Heartfelt poem, greatly done :)

I like the poem, keep it up

Great job. The common thing for me or other readers to do is judge a poem by a certain style. This free-style poem of yours remind me of some well-known poets. The poem was clear and had a variety of words. The only change I would make is add "have" in "What else have you killed"

Great job

Awww sooo sad, but wonderful written. i really like the way you write your poems. excellent job. 5/5

~Kristina

Again you have proven that you can render me near speechless with your poems. I really enjoyed reading this. It was short, but far from simple. You have a magnificent way of touching the reader with your beautiful words. Keep up the great work. I hope that you are not still angy with me. :(
5/5

Letty