Comments : In the Pine Tree

  • 15 years ago

    by Ellie

    All three were short, cute, and sweet. Perhaps something different sometime? :-P Good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Leslie

    Ooo i like this. i've read some haikus in my time and this one is good. bravo, so many people muddle haikus with long words and leave them feeling unfinished but this one stands strong and alone. dont change it at all, i've got my perfect little image and its unmistakeable and wonderful