Great poem. i love it. it has great rhythm and flow. u have talent so keep on writing
take care
luve angie

Good work !! wonderful poem.

just thought i would point out the spelling mistake with the first yearning.

u have a lot of talent!! keep on writing and i will keep on reading!

sophie:)

p.s i would appreciate it if u could read a few of my poems and leave a few comments! :)