Ryme scheme was off, but good vocab and i liked the subject matter, i liked it good job

I acutally love this poem. Your wording choices, are fantastic, and it's very wel detailed and written. It was such a wonderful read. I enjoyed it.

Thats a nice poem! \

love the flow!

Looking through the window of mans dissolution
victors of the past become victims of the future

These lines were my favorite in a wonderful poem. The flow and content was outstanding. Great work and thanks for entering my contest.