Comments : She Can't Find A Cure

  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    It's well written, reads nicely :)
    well done
    maybe a comma between disgustedly and I am that ?would make a good pause to make "I am that" sound stronger i think
    keep it up :))

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Excitingly written, good pouint that you have brought up too.

    october xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very interesting... this is true happen in real life and the story is good

    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This poem was also very good! its true, and does happen in real life!

    keep it up!