Aww it's so sad.

[Phone calls come once a blue moon
I've forgotten the sound of songs]
^^That was my favourite. =) It just jumped out to me. It made me remember about a lot of my past. The flow was good, and I liked it a lot. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Another nice poem!
loved it
lol donno what to say!

"As it breathes for the first time"
Now this, I like. You're definetely going on my favourites list, I love your work. 5 from me, well done! ^.^

Wow... very sad, but i like what your saying in this poem. 5/5

Very good poem. With good rhythm and word choice.5/5

Very nice poem, good flow, good vocab, you're a good writer. 5/5

I liked this, I thought it was sweet yet sad.
The flow threw me at times, but apart from that I think you did a good job.