Very nice,lovely poem,
The flow is fluid as well
Good Work!

God Bless!

I liked this poem, the pattern was....different? But that was part of what drew me into it. It was a very emotion felt poem. Keep it up. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

I'll ask for nothing more
than to have your memory
remain forever
lodged,
like a blissful thorn,
in my coveting
heart.

^^ I love those lines. Very impacting. Flowed very well.. like Jenna saidm the pattern was very cool!
I love your poetry, you have an amazing gift. Never stop writing!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Once again ~ a beautifully written poem!