Wow... You know, I really did enjoy this poem so very much. I love the way you grasped the idea with imagery. Fantastic!

Ah beauty...this poem has a certain feeling that rings about life.
good work.

keep on writing on what u feel and like!

God bless!

Wow great piece i really enjoy reading this poem and yeah the idea was great i love all those lines you used great imaginary and although there are I's that other poems didnt want to see it is still great me I dont care of those

the important is the feelings and the rhythm the flow of the poem

you really made a good job here
5/5 and i like the very ending

geneross

I love your poem....

I read your poem and it made me think.

I really enjoyed this poem...keep writting..please comment and rate my poems..thanks..~DARK~